Monday, April 5, 2010

cinquain for Pete & Lulu

my girls
muddy, dripping
squealing, playing, splashing
a Monday afternoon sprinkler


The Write Girl said...

This is a sweet, poem. I love the imagery in this piece and how you describe the girls is quite lovely. Good luck on poetry month!

Omgirl said...

You must leave someplace way warmer than me. JEALOUS!!

45andaspiring said...

Talk to me about the "a" and the break of the next to last line. . .

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