tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8334253198605447602.post7650065097192115186..comments2023-06-28T11:41:37.792-04:00Comments on The Itsy Bitsy Monkey: A Scenic Detourbelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01247590943276439138noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8334253198605447602.post-36287823014987476932011-01-14T17:10:39.095-05:002011-01-14T17:10:39.095-05:00Very nicely done. I see what 45andaspiring means, ...Very nicely done. I see what 45andaspiring means, though. I think it's the run away that's confusing. But a very nice poem indeed.The Grandpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08548802274156524456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8334253198605447602.post-34459486131330738792011-01-09T21:25:34.400-05:002011-01-09T21:25:34.400-05:00I really enjoyed this poem. What a wonderful excer...I really enjoyed this poem. What a wonderful excercise. I think you did the original poem justice. I didn't know poets and writers had fun prompts. Sounds awesome :)The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8334253198605447602.post-49882190267726598252011-01-09T17:26:30.648-05:002011-01-09T17:26:30.648-05:00So cool that you did this bel. I think it's a...So cool that you did this bel. I think it's a great way to play with different forms and rhyme. I need to try this exercise too. I love how your version came out. Very good!septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8334253198605447602.post-42813131573945779072011-01-09T11:50:27.350-05:002011-01-09T11:50:27.350-05:00Interesting way to write a poem. Modeling the rhym...Interesting way to write a poem. Modeling the rhyme scheme and structure without really having to understand or name what you are doing. <br /><br />I like your results. You can see the resemblence to Vespers but not the same form (like different opening and closing). <br /><br />I had trouble with the first 2 lines on the next to last stanza. Seems like they don't fit with not being seen?Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05399161142015515172noreply@blogger.com